editors

carl brown edit my paper and I edit myself

Goanimate video

http://goanimate.com/movie/0MMcU3UYDzYU?utm_source=linkshare&uid=0f5VCLt3Ef4s

goanimate

I think I will have kids being in the track and field, competing against each other. I could have kids driving in the go-cart racing down the tracks. Another thing would be is going to trips like a vacation. I think that this would be more appropriate for the children to watch and maybe add some little funny side to the animate and they would think it is hilarious.

Collaborative thoughts

I thought it was really great working with all of your group members. This actually helps get things done faster and we all have ideas to add on in the story. Any of our group member can edit, check spelling errors, grammars and punctuation. This helps better for someone to edit if you can't give them your paper. Doing this on Google Docs is an easy process which helps me to become a better writer. The similarity between the google docs and microsoft is that you can add comments to what needs to be improve of the paper.